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开头段：描述图画

1.话题引起：开篇点题

The past (several years/ decades/ centuries/ months) have witnessed a (common/ not unconmmon) social phenomenon that …
There is (growing/ increasing/ mounting/ expanding) (national/ worldwide/ global) awareness of …
1. the importance of …
2. the importance and detriment of …
3. the pros and cons of … （利弊并存）
4. the detriment of …
In no country other than … , it has been said, is the problem of … more serious.
Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon (situation/ issue) that …
Recently, it often hits the headline of the newspaper that …, which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.
These days (Recently/ In recent years/), there is a hot topic among the general public concerning (regarding /respecting/ in reference to) …
1. These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is …

2.图画描述

如图所示

As is (vividly/ subtly/ symbolically/ clearly) shown in the (ridiculous/ funny/ interesting/ thought-provoking/ eye-catching) (picture/ cartoon/ drawing/ photograph/ caricature讽刺漫画)
1. It is … shown in the … that …

描述图画的基本公式

核心事物： a girl, a handsome girl, a beautiful American girl.
地点：in the forest, in the sunshine
动作：smile, stand, wear
细节：ribbo, necklace, Chinese traditional custume.

不断添加修饰来丰富句子内容

Look, there is a photograph of a girl in Chinese custume.

A girl in Chinese costume stands in the sunshine. She smiles.

There is an American girl standing in the sunshine and giving us a sweet smile.

基本公式：地点+动作+核心事物， doing something (表示伴随状态), with + 非核心事物名词(表周围环境和细节)

In the sunshine stands a girl, wearing necklace and ribbon, with a smile on her face.

In the sunshine graciously stands a pretty American girl in traditional Chinese custume, wearing necklace and the like, with a sweet smile on her face.

多图画描述

找两图关系，对应关联词，分别描述图换，用衔接词连接几幅图

图画的文字说明

直接翻译
1. The caption reads, “…”
2. Just as the caption indicates, …
3. The subtitle reads/ indicates, …
意译
1. We are imformed that …
2. When reviewing the subtitle, one cannot help wondering …
3. Hence, the picture connotes a major theme of … / that …

3.图画总结：承上启下

Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning of it is as deep as the ocean.
The implication is not only informative, but instructive as well.(不仅信息丰富而且具有教育意义)
The author’s real purpose is not the picture itself, but to lead is to find what hides behind the picture.
What is depicted in the picture seems exaggerated, which has attracted the extensive attention of the society.
But is this what the author tries to tell us? Certainly not.

中间段：阐释意义

1.具体意义

Undoubtly, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention should be paid to …
1. Without a doubt, we can deduce from the picture that the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to the issue of …
Appearantly, the drawing symbolically reveals a common social phenomenon in our daily life: …
The metaphorical and impressive picture has subtly revealed the relationship between … and …
The picture illustrates the true meaning of …, by stressing the fact that … is a kind of mental strength, which can support us no matter how hard the world around us become.
Actually, the author strives to send out(convey/ deliver/ express ) an abundantly(richly/ plentifully/ extremely) clear message the … is of extreme detriment(of supreme importance) to one’s success.
What lies behind the picture or “buried” in … is clear: (1) … is not only necessary but indispensable as well. (2) … is not only harmful but damaging(disadvantage/ con/ flaw/ drawback) as well. (3) the importance of … coexists with the detriment(harm/ loss) of that.
It goes without saying that its symbolic message that/of … has gone beyond the picture itself.

2.意义阐释

定义和解释

What is idol worship? Idol worship is usually the adolecents’ admiration for super stars.
A culture of one nation may become international. In other words, a nation’s unique culture can become international through worldwide economic and cultural exchanges.

联系社会实际

The delicate flower symbolizes the children, overprotected by their parents, who are revealed as the greenhouse, protecting their children from storms, which represents the intense competition in the real world.

举例和调查

for example, for instance, such as …, take … as a good example
A case in point is …
The point is best illustrated by the example of …
Our human history has been filled with a wide variety of examples on the topic, with the following one being the most persuasive.
Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed and experienced, the most impressive is …
I can think of no better examples than …
There is no better illustration than the examples of …
Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.
The case of … teaches us that …
The experience of … teaches us that …
It is only of the various examples I have (read/ encountered). Similar stories happen everyday.
This is not an isolated example. Inreality , many people will do similarly in the same situation.
According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national organization, approximately 79.2% of the respondents hold the same view that …
A recent survey can back up my point. The survey conducted by … , after polling … , has found that a significant percentage of respondants claimed that …
… , a … , is a perfect example. He did … in the past, which shows his …
… , honored for his/her success in … , is always remembered for his/her …, which shines through every chapter.page of his/her life.
There are inspiring/upsetting parallels today. For instance, …

原因和后果

引出原因的句子

I can think of no better reasons than the following ones. Firstly, … Secondly, …
It is not difficult to come up with some causes accounting for …
What exactly contributes to this phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question. To begin with, … In addition, …
The reasons, which are obvious to us, can be listed as follows. First and foremost, … . Plus, …
Why does such phenomenon (like example mentioned above) emerge? In the first place, … In the second place, …
Considering the significance/seriousness of the present situation, it is necessary to point out the cause behind it.
Why, you may wonder, is this phenomenon so severe in today’s China?

引出后果的句子

So, …
As a result/consequence, …
Consequently, …
There seem to be more than one direct or indirect effects involved in …, which none of us can fail to notice. Firstly, … Secondly, …
The problem mentioned above is bound to generate several consequences if keep turning a blind eye to it. First and foremost, … What’s worse, …

常见原因、后果（理由）

效率

It can greatly enhance our work/study efficiency.
It will greatly decrease our work/study efficiency.
It is nothing but a waste of our precious time and money.

发展

It contributes to the (long-term/comprehensive/sustainable/rapid and sound) development of economy.
It will hamper the (long-term/sustainable/rapid and sound/comprehensive) development of economy.

环境

Something contributes to the improvement of environment.
Something enables us to adapt to the new environmen.
Due to … , our environment will suffer a great destruction.

健康

Something exerts a positive influence on our health both mentally and physically.
Something poses a great threat to our health both mentally and physically.

经济

The development of … has accelerated both the pace of life and economic growth.
Something exacerbates the economic recession.
Something undermines the economic prospects.

便利

It will offer us great convenience in many aspects of our daily life.
It will bring about tremendous inconvenience in many aspects of our daily life.

文化教育

It is conducive to the development and prosperity of culture.
It has detrimental influence on the sustainable development of culture.

社交情感

It can help people enhance their social skills, such as …
It enables people to convey their emotions and individual thoughts more freely .
It is not conducive to the development of social skills.
It has a detrimental imapct on interpersonal communication.

万能原因

政府和法律

Enforcement of laws and regulations about … might be …
Due to lack of pertinent laws and regulations, …
There might be a loophole in law about …

媒体和社会

Coverage of mass media might be partial or exaggerated.
A lack of social concern over … leads to …
Social authority might not take the responsibility to …

公民行动和意识

The citizens might avoid relevant responsibility and duty.
A lack of the individual consciousness of … results in …

对立观点分析

When it comes to …, views might vary from person to person.
Never before in history has the phenomenon of …been talked so much as nowadays.
In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.
Concerning the issus of whether …, people’s views vary form one to another.
In fact, the issue of … has long been a heated discussion.
In face, there is no consensus of opinions among people over the issue of …
Every coin has two sides, and this issue is no exception.
There is much controversy over this trend.
In fact, this matter is still open to discussion.
When it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.
On the one hand, some people hold the view that … To be specific, they claim that … For example, …
As is indicated in the popular wisdom (that …), there is always a reason to say “Yes.” Moreover, some people argue that …
On the other hand, a majority/minority of people maintain that …
To begin with, … Furthermore, … For instance, …
Yet, the rest hold the other side of this picture. For one thing, … For another, … For example, …
Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view, arguing that …
However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority . They hold that …
In fact, this issue has long been a matter of debate. Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … Yet, a majority of people hold the otherside of this picture. Listed below are their reasons. Firstly, … Secondly, … For instance, …
In fact, there is much controversy over this trend. Granted, some people argue that this phenomenon is positive . However, in my eyes, this argument tends to be partial. To the best of my knowledge, this is harmful, mainly because …
Something is beneficial for/ to …
The advantages of sth far outweight its disadvantages.
The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
It will give rise to a number of benefits.
It will bring a multitude of strengths.
It will bring numerous advantages.
Something is detrimental to …
The disadvantages of … far outweight its advantages.
It would bring countless drawbacks.
It would give rise to a host of problems.
It has its shortcomings.
It has several disadvantages.

3.意义总结

How can we, not being that person, know the happiness of him/her?
Were there no …, never would we taste the happiness of life.
Were the situation to continue, we would pay a heavy price.
Were there no …, never can we fell the happiness of life. Yet, were the negative impact of this situation to continue, we would pay a heavy price.
Without …, how could it be possible for … to achieve the ultimate goal?

结尾段：个人评论

1.归纳评论

In view of every aspect of this (positive/negative) phenomenon, we should bear in mind that …
The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took measures to …
If used carelessly or without restraint, the Internet could prove to be a double-edged sword.
For my part, whether the ultimate effect of … is good or not, one thing is certain that … in itself is neither good or bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to socitey.
When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one.
On the basis of the factors metioned above, we may draw a conclusion that …
To …, in my opinion, it calls for the efforts from all sides.

2.建议措施

In terms of …, we should take advantages of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
We should, therefore, as the common saying goes, “absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks”
What we should do is to encourage the strengths and diminish the weaknesses.
The mass media, such as radio, television and the Internet, should make every effort to propagate and advocate the positive thing / reveal and prevent the negative thing.
We must promote and popularize … among the public from every detail in our daily life.
The government has the responsibility to educate every citizen to do something.
Laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to do something.
Laws must be passed to prohibited factories/people form doing sth.
As for ourselves, we ought to take pratical actions to do something.
The public should enhance the consciousness of …
The cultivation of … depends on the active participation of every citizen of our society.

3.憧憬未来

With these measures taken, it is resonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.
With appropriate laws and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a thing of the past.
Only through the efforts of both the government and the individuals can we curb the current undesirable phenomenon and build ip a more harmonious society.
If all the solutions are put into practice, the prospect will become more desirable.
It is resonable for us to believe that we can get more achievements through the joint efforts of all of us.
Only with these measures can we enjoy a better life.
Only in this way can we make out world more colorful and vigorous.
Looking further ahead, we can say with full confidence/certainty that it is resonable for us to expect a saner society.
Through/By waiting and hoping, we will be able to achieve out ultimate goal.
I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we can do something.
People in society will develop a forward-looking attitude and make their life worth living and the world more beautiful as well.
Only by the joint efforts of whole society can we create a real conservation-minded society.

设计亮点

引出谚语

“…” is an old cliche, but I totally agree with it.
People often say “…” . Ironically, it is easier said than done.
To adapt a common saying, “…”
Just as Confucious puts it, “…”
Just as a proverb says, “…”
Today when we are arguing about whether … , we should not forget what a famous British sociologist has addressed, “…”

常用谚语、名言

教育学习
1. Knowledge is power (Francis Bacon)
2. A good book is a good friend.
3. Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.
4. Learning without thinking leads one to perplexity; thinking without learning puts one in calamity. (Confucious)
5. Never too old to learn.
工作生活
1. Don’t gild the lily (William Shakespeare)
2. The value of life lies not in the lengths of days, but in the use we make of them.
3. Life is like a box of chocolate, you never know what you’re gonna get. (Forest Gump)
科技经济
1. Science is not a disciple of reason but, also, one of romace and passion.(Stephen Hawking)
2. Experience is the father of wisdom. Experience is the mother of science.
3. Science and technology constitute the primary productive force.
社会坏境
1. Actions speak louder than words.
2. Don’t judge one book by its cover.
3. There is kindness to be found everywhere.
4. When in Rome, do as Romans do.
道德和爱情
1. A candle lights others and consumes itseldf.
2. A good fame is better than a good face.
3. Love me, love my dog.
理想现实
1. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
2. God helps those who help themselves.
3. If winter comes, can spring be far behind? (Shelley)
4. The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream.
人生逆境
1. Cease to struggle and you cease to live.
2. No cross, no crown.
3. It is wise to learn at another man’s cost.
4. To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.
娱乐休闲
1. Reading is to mind what exercise is to the body.
2. Health is happiness.
3. All works and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

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